How to Tickle Your Siblings

I wrote this essay for school. I want your guys opinion.


How to Tickle Your Siblings


Your little siblings, whether brother or sister, will get to be very annoying. You want to give them a good punishment, but not a harsh one. So why not make them laugh, really, really, hard, but how? No one knows the funniest joke in the world, and it really depends on what type of jokes they like. So what do you result to: Tickling.
--- Tickling your little sibling is hard. You need to know where they’re ticklish, when the right time to tickle them is, when to stop tickling them so the can breathe or they’ll start crying, etc.
---- First, you need to find out where they’re ticklish. Maybe tickle them a little, or watch someone else tickle them, and see where they laugh the most. The most common one is under the arm. My brother laughs harder when I poke his belly. Second, you should tickle them at the right time. You don’t want to do it when they’re unhappy, or they just got home from school or woke up from a nap. When your playing a game, and they beat you, that would be a good time. They’re happy, you’re happy, and you have a perfectly good reason to tickle them till the laugh they’re bladder lets loose. Third, is to know when to stop. When they’re bladder let’s go, for example, is a perfect place to stop. If they start crying and hitting you, you should say “Sorry”, then run and hide before mom comes.
--- Now, this may not work for adults and they’re siblings for 3 reasons: (1) It just doesn’t look right to see a 50 year old man trying to tickle his 35 year old brother, (2) There are better ways, now that you’re both older, to torture him, and (3) You brother now has biceps as big as you head, and is the size of a Fedral Express Truck.
---- Now you know how to tickle your brother or sister. You could go without all the trouble to figure out where it tickles, when to tickle, and to find out when to stop, and just not tickle them at all if you’re not that type of person. If you do succeed, though, in becoming a tickle master, you can always move to other, bigger, and really hard-to-tickle type of people; your parents.